Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia Ora Eli, this is Zana from the Summer Learning Journey. Your Pepeha looks really good, I like the use of blue in the title to add a pop of color and it is great that you added a farewell at the end. I noticed your Iwi is Ngati Porou in the Gisborne region that is a nice area have you visited their before? You could possibly add a photo of yourself or your maunga or awa to the Pepeha to add some more detail. Thank you, Zana Yates
Kia Ora Eli, this is Zana from the Summer Learning Journey. Your Pepeha looks really good, I like the use of blue in the title to add a pop of color and it is great that you added a farewell at the end. I noticed your Iwi is Ngati Porou in the Gisborne region that is a nice area have you visited their before? You could possibly add a photo of yourself or your maunga or awa to the Pepeha to add some more detail.
ReplyDeleteThank you,
Zana Yates
Hi Zana,
ReplyDeleteThankyou very much for your comment. I have inserted a picture of my maunga
to improve my work.
Thank you
Eli Harrison