Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Friday, September 3, 2021
Waking the giant
the ground began to shake out of nowhere like an earthquake. Birds bolted fast off the summer trees. All of a sudden the town hall statue came to life wrenching himself off the freshly cut grass. His hands were the size of a school bus. Finally, he stood up and he looked at me and he could smell my fear! Then… BOOF BOOF BOOF he jogged off at the speed of a Ferrari. Screams echoed through the tall building that surrounded me. I saw in his run he was hungry!
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Talofa lava Eli, Ms Peters here. I enjoyed reading your Waking the giant story. I liked how you used a sizzling start and a character twist. Maybe next time you could proofread, checking for punctuation and include a drawing or photo of your Giant. Keep up the good effort Eli, blog ya later!
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